Dune: House Corrino

I finished reading Dune: House Corrino by Brian Herbert & Kevin Anderson. Let me start by saying it’s better than the first two. Let me continue by saying that when I got to the end of this third book, I was thinking the story could have been told (and told better) in just one book by discarding all the fluffy nonsense and keeping just the meat of the story.

Bad writing. It’s still there, and it hasn’t gotten any better. Just one example of the completely ridiculous phrases is on page 552, “hold on to the gossamer strands of her sanity.” On its own, that phrase is already ludicrous; what makes it even more so is the fact that the authors had already overused (and misused) the word “gossamer” a dozen times.

Unbelievable actions. Literally millions of innocent civilians are murdered without justification, and without repercussions. A universe where governments behaved this way would not survive the reign of one emperor, let alone 10,000 years.

Hectic ending. The last 150 pages are unnecessarily hectic as the authors try to wrap up the many threads initiated by the unbelievable actions previously mentioned. House Moritani, House Harkonnen, House Atreides and Emperor Corrino are all undertaking major military operations. Furthermore, Jessica is in labor, and Project Amal reaches its climax. As if all of this weren’t enough, the authors throw in an additional plot line involving the twisted Mentat Peter DeVries. The motivation for his actions in particular has gone beyond the realm of the unlikely into the realm of mind-boggling-ly (is that a word?) stupid. Usually, when authors have a character do something absurdly un-character-y it’s because of a specific need to move the plot forward, but this particular plot already had WAY too much going on as it was. This additional thread was nothing more than a distraction.

Inattention to detail. I have previously mentioned that the authors sometimes appear not to have read the original Dune Chronicles series. Well, now I wonder if they’ve read their own work. On page 49, they write “A few years ago, distracted by a document he’d been studying, Leto had accidentally crushed the insect.” But that’s not actually what happened in House Harkonnen; what actually happened is that Leto was distracted FROM the document BY a guard and the document fell on the insect.

Freedom. Why do “the good guys” keep using the word “free”? Leto and Rhombur might be good enlightened leaders, but that doesn’t make them any less than complete autocrats or make their peoples any more free than they would be under the Tleilaxu or Harkonnens or Corrinos. This could have provided a fruitful line of discussion had the authors been trying to paint their characters as unaware of their own failings in this regard, but Herbert & Anderson don’t seem to have given this a second thought (despite their excessive use of the word “free”) and never manage to move beyond their naïve notion of good versus evil to explore this idea.

Overall, I would rate it slightly higher than the first two books in the series, somewhere between 3 and 4 stars. Still no masterpiece.